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She Feels Like a Poem
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She Feels Like a Poem |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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She feels like a poem covered in pearls, lost in a meadow or ocean of furls. Taken down into soft sand by sun wind and sea, glinted by moon light protected by trees. Whistled by gypsies with dancing bare feet, laughed into good humor feeling so sweet. Listen the poem whose cadence is rich, pull thread through her daydream and take the first stitch. _____________ Sunshine--this one's for you! In the dew of little things, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ S M O O T H ! She will love it ... yanno ? *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
she will love it,it is incredible an sweet  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
out of your gentleness and soften thoughts, how could she not love and cherish the words and thoughts...gentle smile |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
pretty Proust- |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Martie--Lovely writing. PM |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful! Haven't read anything of you for awhile m'friend...so this was nice to encounter... hugs  KIt is to do with tree-ferns: |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She feels like a poem covered in pearls, lost in a meadow or ocean of furls. Taken down into soft sand by sun wind and sea, glinted by moon light protected by trees. ==========================  Martie Rhymed!! what a groovy poem and intend... "pull thread through her daydream and take the first stitch." what a very cool line that is!! well done poetess Martie-girl  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie! Here it is, an early Saturday morning, and I'm blushing! You caught me up on this one, girl! Oh shoot...you've even made me teary! There is just no way to thank you...but that doesn't mean I won't stop trying! Thank you little one...I cherish this, and it's a keeper! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooo beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm clicking my red shoes to get you home! We are all having a Martie-drought. Get thee back here... and favor us! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, I just enjoyed this so much!!! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...very soft and sweet... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...very soft and sweet... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...very soft and sweet... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Martie gal, you rhyme with such grace... I'd beg for more if I didn't know so well that I'll enjoy your words whatever the style. *S* I especially love the last two lines... beautiful! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
This was very lovely. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
From one lovely and talented poetess to another Enjoyed this Liz |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Listen the poem whose cadence is rich, pull thread through her daydream and take the first stitch. beautiful, Martie "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent tribute to our favorite ray of sunshine! She deserves this Martie....well done!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie, this was so lovely and such a good reflection of Sunshine too. Lord, but I missed your poetry, and I loved this rhyming one. Into that library this one goes, and welcome home, I missed you! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is beautiful Martie, I am sure sunshine will love this. Nice to have you back missed you. Maree |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi all...I've been away so couldn't reply until now...thank you for seeing the sun shine as I do. She is a special lady. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, We missed you terribly. You are one of my favorites. Beautiful |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
poetry... Regards, Sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey - I think you might be describing me here - I'm about to become a bare-footed gypsy... I'm lovin' it...  |
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