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Star Stealing Girl |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
She collects tears from midnight skies baskets filled with diamonds saved for her lover hoping he'll return, see, what his absence has wrought upon her lonely heart She sails wispy clouds until the wee hours of morn closes her eyes when the sun smiles a reminder how her own has gone missing when once it riviled beautiful day her smile, like herself now takes refuge in shadows behind walls, Until he returns, she will commune with the night, collecting tears... ~Tier 6/01 |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
her smile, like herself now takes refuge in shadows behind walls, Ahh Tier, gentle one....this is the saddest of all to me...very nicely done..gentle smile |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, this one hurts a little. Hopefully he won't be gone too long and she won't have to be too sad. Lonely write, Tier. All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tier, the image that's here is superb. . . very heartfelt and tender. . . a quite work about what happens when you miss someone you love. . . beautiful. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh.....a picture of sweet sadness. I like this very much. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Collecting tears, it can't be much sadder than that. And yet beautiful also. Love is like that, I think, so much beauty and sadness combined. Much enjoyed, as always. Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was so very beautiful. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ I liked the title very much ... and the gentle sadness of the write within. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
when the sun smiles a reminder how her own has gone missing when once it rivaled beautiful day Classic Tiersdin! |
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