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SEA
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0 posted 2001-05-31 06:32 PM




Romance
Simple to give
If you take but a chance
Imagination from your heart
Soft candle light and music to enhance
Sweet beautiful words that entice
An invitation to dance
Hold me close in
Romance
Kisses given
My prompt to your advance
Slide your hands upon swaying hips
Without a question.......it's all in the glance
And if you simply cannot see
or garner by my stance
I'm ready for
Romance

~SEA~

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-05-31 06:34 PM


May I have this dance?  
My buckle needs polishing and ... nawwwwwwwwwww.  
I'll just post another

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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2 posted 2001-05-31 06:35 PM


Neat!
Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-05-31 06:45 PM


WOW SEA, that's a beauty.

Envy a bit, haven't tried that form yet, think it is still to difficult for me to do in English. Maybe.....some day....when I've grown up. (56 is still young isn't it  )

Love it much

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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4 posted 2001-05-31 07:05 PM


LOOK AT YOU~~~~
Dang girl...you are a fast learner!!!
I am impressed....it took me a whole bunch of lessons...
but then I AM left handed    
and your poem lives up to its lovely title
very cool presentation too...
well done grooy-gator  

I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breathe

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2001-05-31 07:06 PM


Very pretty!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-05-31 07:30 PM


SEA...I am warmly impressed!

Jamie
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7 posted 2001-05-31 08:03 PM


Very very cool SEA
SEA
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8 posted 2001-05-31 08:04 PM


Interloper~ thank you..and I LOVED the reply poem.....wow....

Krawdad~ thanks  

Titia~ thank you...age is a state of mind....I would never have gueesed you to be so young!  

Brad~ thank you  

Janet and Karilea~ special thanks to special ladies for their help.....it means a lot to me that you would help me to learn and grow...hugs and love to you both!  


~SEA

SEA
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9 posted 2001-05-31 08:06 PM


Jamie~sorry, I didn't mean to miss your reply, thank you!!    SEA
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10 posted 2001-05-31 11:31 PM


SEA~
Lovely ... just LOVELY !
Gal, you've got the talent !
Love it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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state of mind
11 posted 2001-06-01 12:30 PM


I thought you were always ready and connected for romance



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-01-2001).]

Watersign6
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12 posted 2001-06-05 08:04 PM


i love this one,way to write  
Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2002-02-04 08:31 PM




(sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...you are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart is always ready to share such romance with us all, this is bound to melt his heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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