Tonight, Quiet, Moments..................

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-06-01 10:08 AM

Tonight
we can relax
unwind from this long week
and steep our souls in together
Tonight

~**~

Quiet
alone with you
is all I ever want
time to just be with you and be
Quiet

~**~

Moments
like this with you
so precious to my heart
my fondest memories are these
Moments

~SEA~

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

1 posted 2001-06-01 10:22 AM

Beautiful Cinquain. Most Cinquain has a jolting, pulling back of the reins affect, but your never do. The form is perfection and your works flow silently, yet melodically from the page. Thank you. Just the right touch.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-01 10:22 AM

The tranquility is aptly expressed. My only question is ... for how long

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-06-01 10:25 AM

Look at that beautiful tide rolling in and that sweet picture and the words to go with it.....wonderful presentation SEA

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-06-01 10:28 AM

JL~ my goodness, thank you so much

Interloper, as long as I get those moments with him....that's all that matters

Kathleen~ thank you very much....

~SEA

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2001-06-01 10:34 AM

Must be friday!!!!! so that the relaxation, and moments can happen, together........

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-06-01 10:51 AM

SMOOOOOOOTH as butter baby LOL ...
Julian is so right...you do these so soft and gently...
like a warm breeze bringing in peace
have a wonderful weekend girlie

I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breathe

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-06-01 11:16 AM

And I KNOW he knows just how lucky he is

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-06-01 12:02 PM

You do this form so very effectively. I love the serenic feeling conveyed with these. A pleasure always to read.

Poeminister

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

9 posted 2001-06-01 01:27 PM

SEA, another lovely write. Very nice.

Hugs,
Tammy

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-06-01 04:54 PM

Well you absolutely will know this one I LOVE, the words and your choice of graphics were stunning Sea, and the whole package was awesome!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

~*~Please remember to tell someone you love them today~*~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-06-01 05:01 PM

Yes, Sea...a time to cuddle, be quiet and enjoy the holding. I love this and the painting is beautiful.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

12 posted 2001-06-05 08:01 PM

great write

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2002-02-04 08:34 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever hold the love of your life close to your heart and cherish these quiet tender moments with him forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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