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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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summerwind carry my words away to her there let her hear my voice as you flow gently across her tender skin covering her with my love let her see my face as she looks into the dusk of the sky when the moon begins to peek its face from behind the clouds let her know that even though we are far apart that she is never far from my heart carry my words away now summerwind carry them to my love ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
always a breeze here in amarillo..nice one sven...looking out the window this very minute..not a breeze in sight haa... ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now, this is a lovely sentiment! As usual, you never cease to impress, you are the king of romantics  Mind if I hitch a ride on that summerwind of yours, so that my thoughts can sail to *him* as well?!!!Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderfully gentle write Sven. Beautiful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*just coming back to save this poem* it was so beautiful to me that I suppose I forgot to save it in my awe  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oh good gosh.... summerwind.... where was I when you invented this one... talk about inspiration breezing in... now I'm jealous.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely and softly penned...I like this very much. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sven, someday I hope I can grow up and write words that flow like yours do, how very tender and nice...gentle smile |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Summerwind...no doubt your friend. Message so poetically delivered! |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Hi Sven! Isn't it something how that summerwind carries with it special messages....like musical notes strung together in the heat of the sun to cool the glistening sweat on our brow or on our necks.... Glorious piece, Sven. Thanks for your words! JULIE I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just a little breeze blowing through the window now, as I read this. Absolutely beautiful. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very sweet poem, Sven... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven, this is soooo lovely. The sunsets casting a glow of welcome upon a face upturned awaiting his caress, words of love whispered upon sweet zypher... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, there have been a lot of breezes here too, just not the right ones. . . thank you. . .Melissa, sure thing, there's always room for one more. . .thank you so much. . . GS, thank you for reading my friend. . . Sunshine, I suspect that you were in the same place that I was, feeling the wind. . . and don't be jealous my friend, it is I who should be jealous. . . Poeminister, thank you very much. . . Logan, don't worry, you're already there, thank you my friend. . . JLR, thank you, I do try. . .  Hi Julie!! yes, there is something about the summerwind that I've always loved, and thanks for seeing it here. . . Sandra, then you know what I'm talking about. . . thank you. . . Wynter, thank you as always my friend. . . Tier, you never cease to amaze me with your replies. . . I love it. . . thank you my friend. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and let the wind blow my thoughts away to you and let you realise how fond i am of your writing... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may true love always sweep you off your feet and carry you to loves destiny forever! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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