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Sven
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0 posted 2001-06-14 09:26 PM


summerwind
carry my
words away
to her
there

let her
hear my
voice
as you
flow gently
across her
tender skin
covering her
with my
love

let her
see my
face
as she looks
into the
dusk of
the sky
when the
moon begins
to peek its
face from
behind the
clouds

let her
know
that even
though
we are far
apart
that she
is never far
from
my
heart

carry my
words away
now
summerwind
carry them
to
my
love

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2001-06-14 09:28 PM


always a breeze here in amarillo..nice one sven...looking out the window this very minute..not a breeze in sight haa...

               ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-06-14 09:31 PM



Now, this is a lovely sentiment! As usual, you never cease to impress, you are the king of romantics    Mind if I hitch a ride on that summerwind of yours, so that my thoughts can sail to *him* as well?!!!

Into my library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~

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3 posted 2001-06-14 09:35 PM


Wonderfully gentle write Sven.  Beautiful.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Honeybee
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4 posted 2001-06-14 09:38 PM



*just coming back to save this poem*
it was so beautiful to me that I suppose I forgot to save it in my awe  

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-06-14 09:41 PM


oh good gosh....

summerwind....

where was I when you invented this one...

talk about inspiration
breezing in...

now I'm jealous....

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-06-14 09:45 PM


Lovely and softly penned...I like this very much.


Logan
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7 posted 2001-06-14 09:53 PM


Ahh, Sven, someday I hope I can grow up and write words that flow like yours do, how very tender and nice...gentle smile
JLR
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8 posted 2001-06-14 10:01 PM


Summerwind...no doubt your friend.  Message so poetically delivered!
Julie Jordan Scott
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9 posted 2001-06-14 10:04 PM


Hi Sven!

Isn't it something how that summerwind carries with it special messages....like musical notes strung together in the heat of the sun to cool the glistening sweat on our brow or on our necks....

Glorious piece, Sven.

Thanks for your words!

JULIE

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men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn
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catalinamoon
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10 posted 2001-06-14 10:29 PM


Just a little breeze blowing through the window now, as I read this. Absolutely beautiful.
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-06-15 12:16 PM


a very sweet poem, Sven...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Tiersdin
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12 posted 2001-06-15 11:51 AM


Sven, this is soooo lovely.

The sunsets
casting a glow
of welcome
upon a face
upturned
awaiting his
caress,
words of
love
whispered
upon sweet
zypher...

*smiles*
~Tier


Sven
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13 posted 2001-06-15 01:14 PM


Victoria, there have been a lot of breezes here too, just not the right ones. . .    thank you. . .

Melissa, sure thing, there's always room for one more. . .thank you so much. . .

GS, thank you for reading my friend. . .

Sunshine, I suspect that you were in the same place that I was, feeling the wind. . . and don't be jealous my friend, it is I who should be jealous. . .

Poeminister, thank you very much. . .

Logan, don't worry, you're already there, thank you my friend. . .

JLR, thank you, I do try. . .

Hi Julie!!     yes, there is something about the summerwind that I've always loved, and thanks for seeing it here. . .

Sandra, then you know what I'm talking about. . . thank you. . .

Wynter, thank you as always my friend. . .

Tier, you never cease to amaze me with your replies. . . I love it. . . thank you my friend. . .  

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kaile
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14 posted 2001-06-17 12:40 PM


and let the wind blow my thoughts away to you and let you realise how fond i am of your writing...
vandana
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15 posted 2001-06-17 07:48 PM


nice poem
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16 posted 2002-02-04 08:25 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may true love always sweep you off your feet and carry you to loves destiny forever! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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