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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-31 03:12 PM

Place of Good Bye

a seed is planted
in the ground
death is near
all around
yet, there are flowers
in this place
people turn
tears erase
this is the end
we’ve grown
to know
a quiet place
most all
shall go
confused we
question life
and wonder why
as we blankly stare
and say our last
good bye

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

1 posted 2001-05-31 03:23 PM

How did you know that was on my mind
and kept me up ALL night last night?
You're wonderful.

[This message has been edited by g-hm (edited 05-31-2001).]

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

2 posted 2001-05-31 03:32 PM

oh my how sad but wonderfully written,i can feel the emotion in this one

theLadypoet
Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 97
Or USA

3 posted 2001-05-31 03:39 PM

Very well-written and says worlds in
just a few words.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-31 05:37 PM

I've asked so many questions in life, sometimes you have to have faith and it's so hard....enjoyed your words very much, Helen.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-05-31 06:26 PM

To some the end; to others a new beginning.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-05-31 08:56 PM

1slick_lady - you write with many thoughts, and with feelings...

BC

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-05-31 10:19 PM

Sometimes I walk through cemetaries just because I find it easy to think there and because there I hear no questions. This reminded me of that.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-02 10:48 AM

sometimes, it's better not to wonder. . .

excellent thoughts here. . .

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