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lunatic
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0 posted 2001-05-29 08:07 PM



The moon smiles,
Peacefully,
Upon all lovers
Content to observe,
Not in a bad way,
The art of love
In practice.
Like anything
And everything else,
One must
Experiment,
Improvise,
Invent,
Invest,
Practice,
And persist.
Love cannot survive
The
                                      Commonplace.

Moonstruck

© Copyright 2001 Man in the Moon - All Rights Reserved
Watersign6
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1 posted 2001-05-29 08:14 PM


the moon smiles peacefully..i really love that line   good read  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-05-30 08:30 AM


With all that the moon sees....no wonder then at the peaceful smile....

how enchanting a write!

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3 posted 2001-05-30 09:46 AM


indeed an Art of Love.  

Charisma

BrightStar
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4 posted 2001-05-30 06:50 PM


Oh, breathtaking.
VAS
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Oregon
5 posted 2001-06-01 02:12 PM


that depends on which definition of love one is using  
lunatic
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6 posted 2001-06-01 02:19 PM


Watersign6 - Thanks for stopping by.

Sunshine - Yes, quite a view  

Charisma - *sigh*

BrightStar - *sigh*  

VAS - I'll use your definition too, just tell me what it is  


Moonstruck

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serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-06-01 02:36 PM


lunatic, I don't believe I have welcomed you to the forum as yet. (haven't been around as much) but welcome! Enjoyed this much, and yes, love is most definitely an ART!  
lunatic
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8 posted 2001-06-01 02:46 PM


serenity - Thank you for the kind welcome  

Moonstruck

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JCGF
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9 posted 2001-06-01 02:53 PM


This is all so true.  Very lovely.  Thanks for the great read.

Hugs,
Tammy

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-06-01 03:57 PM


I agree!  Experiment!  

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-06-01 05:00 PM


Enjoyed reading your thoughts on love...James
Poeminister
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12 posted 2001-06-01 05:04 PM


"Experiment,
Improvise,
Invent,"...

You've put it fine.  Well done.

Poeminister

lunatic
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13 posted 2001-06-02 10:53 AM


Tammy - Thanks for the read and the hug  

Irish Rose - Yup, over and over again  

James - Thanks for the read.

Poeminister - Thank you very much. *sigh*

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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