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In Dreams Only (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Like a moth in mesh Is the soul in flesh, that's free In it's dreams only Love's dream in the eye Makes the moth a butterfly And life's web a rose |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
PM...I know one who will treasure this.... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is so beautifull, gets to my heart. Thank you so much for writing this senryu. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are so very very good at this style.....so much in so little words....thanks! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So beautiful  I really like these |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like a moth in mesh Is the soul in flesh, that's free In it's dreams only  Love's dream in the eye Makes the moth a butterfly And life's web a rose  ~~~~~~~~~~ these are perhaps the best I ever read... they definately effect me, and have the required impact...also sheer beauty, and the rhyme added to their pleasures. These are outstandingly well conceived and written. You were right Deca.. I do...TY Thank you PM, tho not wrote "for" me... in some ways they define me. placing them in treasure box now  I'm hanging on your every word |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Poeminister, Excellent Senyru! beautiful too. Panne |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How lovely |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
really really lovely May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Decaflame--Thanks for stopping in and commenting. Titia Geertman--Thank you, Titia. I'm glad you liked these. VAS--Thank you for your kind comment. ethome--Glad to know you enjoyed these. Thanks for stopping by. SEA--Thank you so much for your comments. Janet Marie--Grammercy, for your gracious compliment and the lovely pictures. I'm glad you liked these and was hoping you might. Panne447--Thanks for reading and enjoying. Paula Finn--A lovely comment. Thank you. A Whisper's Caress --Glad you liked these. Thank you. take care, Poeminister |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
fabulous poem and i think those butterflies are beautiful too |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Thank you Watersign! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
these are beautiful senryus....enjoyed them very much. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Just lovely. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Beautiful images painted with skill Thank you Regards, Olias. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Beautiful....... few lines that say just sooooo much The image you used is quite beautiful and eloquent ------------- "only in their dreams can men be truly free It was always thus and always thus will be" ----------------- I've heard it somewhere.....  I think it has a similar theme to yours Thank you ********************* It's only me.......only me |
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