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Open Poetry #14

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zzz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 55

0 posted 2001-06-07 02:57 PM

my daughter wrote this since she has no e mail as of yet ive sent it through on mine she would welcome any comments she is 14 yrs
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the light at the end of the tunnel
the shoulder to cry on
the calm in the storm
the answer to my questions
the wisdom in a crazy world
the slice of heaven we crave
an angel without wings

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2001-06-07 03:14 PM

Wonderful Words and truth in every line, I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-07 03:21 PM

Quite a tribute to the most important person in the world ... your mother

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

3 posted 2001-06-07 03:53 PM

You should be proud!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

4 posted 2001-06-07 03:54 PM

My compliments to her. May she continue what she's obviously very talented at.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-06-07 09:22 PM

this is very good and she should keep on writing she has a natural talent

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