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Guilt of Fall... A duet with Serenity
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Guilt of Fall... A duet with Serenity |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Guilt of Fall Behind lidded eyes of day's gone by words remain still to this day insane as each sound EXPOUNDS in drip Chinese water tortureless every day the same inane mundane and weighted to the ground I drown and within death her surety I find myself sheer release the glory I am after all even in the guilt of fall and silence lies from lines of times of first words uttered and remembering first glance the sentence that you stuttered I touched my hand into your hair and felt the life of God in there and everything was just before I only knew I wanted more beneath our sky wet with rain light of earth and dark of shame words still remain letters due each word a cherished piece of you Serenity/ Dark Angel 29/5/01 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Fabulous writing duet by two very talented poets!! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Yes, I enjoyed this very much.... |
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StarPhantasy New Member
since 2001-05-29
Posts 5Louisiana, USA |
there is no other word to describe this, but simply breathtaking. This a great piece of work. )*E*( |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
as each sound EXPOUNDS in drip Chinese water tortureless every day the same inane mundane and weighted to the ground I drown and within death her surety I find myself sheer release the glory I am after all even in the guilt of fall WOW Jaw dropping stuff here. you guys make an excellent team. your audience demands more poetry, even if you have to lose sleep writing it. nOt that will matter to night owl Seren.  "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ethome, Decaflame, StarPhantasy and Brian..... Thank you so much for your lovely replies, we do appreciate them so  Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read Glad you enjoyed. Hey me Sista It was a real pleasure writing with you hon, oh and trying to keep up with ya  Thank you Maree |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
and silence lies from lines of times of first words uttered... Amazing duet here...enjoyed! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bravo!! Great writing you guys! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow!!! This is fabulous!  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is simply wonderful! Truly is! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow. Flabbergasted. You two ladies write fabulously well together. Love you both  K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
fabulous written.....you two are a great combination. enjoyed it a lot. Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh...my...goodness... now wont ya have a look at this... so thats what sheer delight looks like?  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you dix, for bringing this up...I'd forgotten how easily we sang together. She's good... |
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