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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Waltzing Luna ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ Moonlight glows soft serenade - across indigo sky is laid - stairway to Allegheny moon - lovers step Luna's tune - lilting of poetic song Gentle moon does bring along - just one gentle dance of wonder - waltz of an evening lightly wanders- upon such adoring thoughts as these moonbeams sway in gentle breeze - come sweet dance with me ~*~ ~ Allegheny Moon ~ Sequenced by Margi Harrell www.smickandsmodoo.com ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I love the format here Marge...it sits so nicely on the page...was it hard to do? I can never do formatted works like this...  K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ Little slice of green cheese ! Piece of cake ... falls easily to the page for me. That's me 'prissy' coming out to play !  Thanks for stopping by ! *Hugs* ~*Marge(y)*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
wonderful images, as i have come to expect from you.... the form is interesting too, kind of an inverse teardrop.... was that intentional? and if so (i'm kinda dense) what was it meant to suggest? -Napalm
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NCC~ Kinda ? LOL !  Shucks, I just write 'em ... You expect ME to explain 'em ?  Que Sera, Sera ~ Open to perceptive interpretation, my friend. Glad you enjoyed ... Hey ... I like that 'inverse' ... that's what we poets do well ! ! THANKS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay I have had my laugh for tonight that's for sure, and I will just go out under an alligaty (sp?) moon and howl now...that was a fun thing, thank you Marge. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Hey ! This waltz is no laughing matter ! !  Whatever has gotten into you ?  Were ya' struck on the head by a falling moonbeam ? ? Oh ... forgot, that was ME that took the 'bonk' ! LOL ! Good to see your laughter, my friend ! *Hugs* ~*LoonyLunaLady*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
OH DEAR MAIDEN ANOTHER MASTERPIECE WHAT CLASS PLEASE SAVE THE LAST DANCE FOR ME<> |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh, this is Majestic... Regards to you Marge, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've said it before and I will say it again... I do so love when Margie moons us   another beauty from your luna muse girliegirl. you shine divine We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, whenever I see the moon full I always hear myself say that's Margie's moon. An outstanding and magnificent piece from you. I really love you sister mine, you lift me up when I'm having difficulty standing up straight. Thank you muchly Take care love and warm stuff Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Allegheny Moon beautiful song about me and how my light shines Moonlight Serenade is that much more beautiful and speaks to my heart and wonderful waltz music of Man-In-The-Moon truly conjures love Moonstruck |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Sweet Soaring Eagle~ Grandma always said "Gotta dance the last dance with the fellow what brung you -so that definitely is YOU~ ~*~ ~*~ Sudhir~ Ah, a bit of inspire lingering in that majestic moon Spilling her glow just for you ~*~ ~*~ JanetMarie~ Just a little bit of mooning - phases of delightful afterglow Shining from the heart of me ~*~ ~*~ MarshaLove~ May your eyes see ~*MargieMoon*~ shining covering you in the softest glow of moonbeamed wishes Sweetly lighting your way into the evening with one whose love quietly sets your loving heart all aglow ~*~ ~*~ LunaTic~ Perfect penning for your poeticized reply How's about just a little bit of two-moon, true-moon compromise in honor of the glow of 'she-moon' waltzing dreamily with the he-moon Loveliest Luna would love to dance across the indigo midnight sky upon radiant beams of your light in shining moments of passionate sigh ~*~ WHAT FUN ! Thanks to all of you for enjoying the glow ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful |
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