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In Need I Dream
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In Need I Dream |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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feeling flowing growing grace with pupils wide I can't unknow all that I'm knowing-- as a whisper to high tide... "stop this" (feeling fever burn) "top this" (file with lessons learned) "touch me" hear my lonely voice "Love me." Yes, that is my choice. from where you are, Just for you, the door's ajar In need I dream your lips on mine-- I need to dream this all the time... I trace my fingers on my lips and brush my hair away from eyes... chest to chest in love's eclipse this moment last forever--MINE. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
May I borrow that last stanza and send it to someone?? It's exactly what I want to say.. you've done it again!!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"stop this" (feeling fever burn) "top this" (file with lessons learned) "touch me" hear my lonely voice "Love me." Yes, that is my choice. Come to me, from where you are, Just for you, the door's ajar In need I dream your lips on mine-- I need to dream this all the time... I trace my fingers on my lips and brush my hair away from eyes... chest to chest in love's eclipse this moment last forever--MINE. ======================== Gawwwd I love the way you write.. the way you rhyme... the way you mirror my thoughts... this is sooooo YOU ... and thats soooo cool. love this one me twin  meI'm hanging on your every word |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah you....beautiful |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
awesome |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful write. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sheesh me sista, ya know what's funny? All I got to do is read the title and I know the poem is yours In need I dream filled with so much longing a yearning so wonderfully expressed by you my dear. You make me sigh! Loved it  Maree |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful writing here i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh I love this one Celeste! Love the yearning soul cry. Lot's of romantic imagination mixed in to accentuate the desire and this line has to be a classic!! "chest to chest in love's eclipse" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There I go again...off in search of poetry and find one I'd forgotten I'd even written much less thank you guys for the replies... Forgive my rudeness...still a busy bee, but I do so appreciate the kindness, as always! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
All I can 2say2u is this is going straight into my treasure of poetry for many many many many more reads sweetie... I luved your poem... hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah again I am pleased... always enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Too true, as always. I love the line "I can't unknow what I am knowing" Same here... Sandra |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
"top this" indeed... no way... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you've centered right in on what I think we all need...and want. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Don't mind me, I had to reread this, it is too good to miss a second read. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks to Coco for bringing this one back. . . it's wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
*wow* ...you have read my heart with this one...this is a keeper! ~Krista |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all again...smiling now, because I do so love when this happens, but hate the realization that it was just a dream...hmmm... or is it?  Love to all...with my eternal gratitude. |
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