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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-07-06 10:41 AM



Building sand castles
momentary creations
~lasting memories

~*~

gentle washing waves
dancing across our bare toes
hear delighted squeals

~**~

sea shell treasures found
for later recollecting
water's peaceful sound

~***~

time captured in mind
forever a part of me
held here....in my heart


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-06 10:47 AM


And a big and wonderful place it is I am sure... to store those memories...

I always enjoy..this is no exception.

I did not grow up near a sea or beach... but river and streams flow through my memories... hot days and wading knee deep into a rocky stream to cool off, chasing minnows or crawfish, always it seemed slipping and getting wetter than you intended, and having to hide out until your clothes dried so you wouldn't get caught..because of course.... you had skeaked off and gone where you weren't supposed to go...

thanks for the trip... as you can see it made me think



SEA
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love those kinds of memories.....have lots like those too! One slippery rock and you were done for LOL   thanks so much  
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kept there in your heart
what a lovely place to be
ah, sweet memories

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4 posted 2001-07-06 10:53 AM


cool mornings dig back
to sandy sea, clammy sounds
fog harboring whims

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5 posted 2001-07-06 11:16 AM


Well you sure lived up to your name here. My favorite thoughts and dreams are of the sea. Love these.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-07-06 11:34 AM


SEA~

Oh, gentlest SEA~
You come lapping at our hearts
Waving memories



*Now you just KNEW I'd find this irrestible !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-07-06 11:36 AM


A "Kodak Moment" in soft focus...  a nice slide-show, SEA.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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8 posted 2001-07-06 11:37 AM



Wonderful haikus and sernyus!   You sure have the talent to pen these beauties~

Take care,
Melissa~

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9 posted 2001-07-06 06:49 PM


I enjoyed reading these, and the feeling of salt air coming from them!


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10 posted 2001-07-06 08:32 PM


ahhh. . . a recollection about re-collecting. . .  

wonderful my friend. . .

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11 posted 2001-07-06 09:38 PM


nice work abt memories

Sea !
i cann't see sea upto now
but u describe ur memories in a good way
this is very good sentences

"time captured in mind
forever a part of me
held here....in my heart"


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12 posted 2001-07-07 12:32 PM


My goodness!  These were absolutely fantastic Sea, and you sure hold true to your poetic name!  I loved them all!

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

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13 posted 2001-07-07 02:04 AM


On this beautiful note of yours...thanks, goodnight.
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14 posted 2001-07-07 05:10 AM


Very nice ...... Lovely...  
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