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Rainy Morn
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
sweet some thoughts snuck in held me close in early morn sharing golden smiles spring’s soft rain still beats Sunday’s lullaby this morn freshening my soul your reign in my heart swelling fills like soft spring rain keeping me alive |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
this is so soft and sweet. I like the way it is written and what it says... alan |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"you reign in my heart on a rainy morn.." very nice choice of words, Lady...  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Soft spring rain does sound like a sweet lullaby. It's been a long time since we've heard it down where I am. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful, and a powerful play on words. Exactly what we have come to expect from you. Well Done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How lovely! Kathleen Blake |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lady In White, This is such a pretty one. Nothing to critique here, just wish it had been longer. Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This felt like a warming of the soul, I loved it! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
water of life. . . excellent Lady. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lady in White, A refreshing, rejuvinating feeling in these words. Very nicely penned. Poeminister |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
sweet some thoughts snuck in held me close in early morn sharing golden smiles I think you have summed up a rainy summer's morning... one word my fellow poet... beautiful very beautiful words. "across the unfair divide |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Alan, sweet and soft is exactly how I meant this to be, thank you... 'Deer, those words hold special meaning, thank you... inot2b, more of us need a bit of wet...thank you... Interloper, I will try to continue to uphold all expectations... Thank you Irish... Auguste, longer? Your wish, my command... Mysteria, what a lovely phrase... Thank you Sven... Poeminister, amazing how water can either refresh, or drown...thank you... Brian, thank you for taking time to read... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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