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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-23 06:42 AM

It Fades With Time

The painfulness of waiting
the want, denied so long

When lips of his engulfed my own
feelings heightened, strong.

Entangled him in sheerness
met his warmth with mine,

Burning softly into night,
lasting for all of time.

Illusions of this dreamworld
the darkness, swallowing me

Losing sense of all surround
I fade into the WE.

Dazed within this time warp
a forever, grained in sand

Turning over, grazed by touch
controlled by time in hand.

I fear the fading moments
when hours turn the tide

Behind remains the passings
To days of now, denied.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-05-23 06:49 AM

It sure does...

Well written...

regards,
sudhir

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-05-23 09:55 AM

Inspirational, so..
I wrote this responding poem,
just slightly off the subject.

Capture time,
in a photograph of two,
it does show,
time ago,
a moment I spent with you
beaming bright
in sunlight
which now has become it’s foe
since t’was made
does now fade
into a grayness it goes,
fades in time,
now recaptured in a rhyme.

Gloom

Rain
Junior Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 21
Atlanta, GA

3 posted 2001-05-23 10:26 AM

Strong and very well written. I really liked this.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-23 11:33 AM

This is good, Maureen, I mean really good, I like this one very, very much.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2001-05-23 11:37 AM

~Wynter,...so many wonderful lines here. And the words 'fading' and 'denied' are such solemn, heavy impacts on the poem. Well done with this expression. *Peace.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2001-05-24 01:37 PM

Enjoyed your words as always Wynter HUGS..
BACK online haa...but no icq just yet...im still on yahoo though..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-05-24 01:57 PM

Naked-
Excellent writing...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-05-24 02:16 PM

I believe that about covers it Wynter...James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-05-24 05:20 PM

enjoy

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

10 posted 2001-05-24 05:31 PM

awesome read - look forward to more of your pen.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-05-21 01:30 PM

very touching write M

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