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Not Just Knots
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Not Just Knots |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Not Just Knots Tied, I feel, from inside out, Bound in ribbons hold. Knotted tight, with no release, Blocking flow, 'til cold. Not today, my mind will say Nor tomorrow, in my view, Will lips of mine be touching yours. I wear the chains of two. Black and teal, desires of The first time colours, worn. There, where eyes were seeking mine, An introspective, born. Wrapped in words of others now, Tied in knots, I'm bound. Together, wonders never cease The day You, I had found. I'm not the who, from months ago, I'm not the who you thought. I am the me of long time past, I am the one now caught... And ribboned by the touch of you, Tied, to morrow's feel. Not just knots to be undone, But yours alone, in real. ~Wynter *not just playing with words tonight*s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-28-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - yours alone I would have been, one iota of time, but changed. Perhaps again, perhaps once again........ You are always real when you write, as I know you through all of them....... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
One iota of time, but changed Perhaps again, some day... Our paths will cross, our eyes will meet No words, will we need say. The past of You and past of Me Will never pass us by, Because the day when we first touched Is forever in mind's eye. ~Wynter *w "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Thoughts to be untied ... Your words are always very real ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ArticulatedSigh Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 26 |
Such strong and moving emotions. They shine through the words. Thanks For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely write Wynter! The title is well established after reading through and then this ending.... "And ribboned by the touch of you, Tied, to morrow's feel. Not just knots to be undone, But yours alone, in real." I really enjoyed the mood of the whole piece! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Not today, my mind will say Nor tomorrow, in my view, Will lips of mine be touching yours. I wear the chains of two. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well done, indeed. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge ArticulatedSigh Ethome Interloper ..thankyou all  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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