Open Poetry #14 |
Comes The Rain |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its wanting to rain Like a flood of desire storming through me at your touch Washing me in a deluge of desire. Thunder Hard, low, and rumbling your hands hot on my body Vibrating to the very core of me. Lightening Piercing the night sky flash after flash of liquid heat Searing me with your kiss illuminating my soul. Soft on my skin, sweet on my lips Comes the rain |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
I for one enjoy the rain admire thunder the music undeniable let it wash in sound and waters Heaven Born all pasts of pain in and outside thee I sing a silent song in hopes of all. "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WHEW....we dont get this kind of forecast on the weather channel very nice girlie...a sensual summer-heaat shower. well done poetess P. Im searchin for my warrior |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Girl you are on fire here! I'll send down a bucket of water to cool you off but first I'll have to throw one on me!! Great poem!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula!... well done! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
so THAT was what caused the deluge we recieved here. Very nice play with the elements, all of them...gentle smile, way to go Paula |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is the kind of rain that I'm talking about. . . great job Paula. . . you presented this well. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! Brilliant as a bolt of lightening! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
hot hot hot |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
(Lightning) spell The entire poem was loaded with imagery and I was caught up in it! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Like a flood of desire storming through me at your touch Washing me in a deluge of desire. It feels that moment before the storm when the hot air meets cold and you can feel something in the atmosphere waiting to ignite. YOu captured that feeling perfectly. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula this poem is sensual, soft and lovely...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula sweet sister, don't you just love the rain when it splashes down like that. Absolutely burning nights love, could you be any better as a teacher? No I think not, this is what I meant girl, you are A writer love and warm stuff Take care love as ever Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SilentSongs...I too love the rain...thank you for your poetic reply... JanetMarie...LMAO...change channels girlie....thanks ethome...hey we can get wet togther ok? LOL thank you sweet poet man... Karilea...thank you!!! Logan...LOL well yeah...you arent all that far from me now are you? Thank you Sven...is there any other kind? Thank you Interloper...Glad you think so...thanks Kathleen...Its nice to get caught up isnt it? Thank you brian...thank you Im happy you think so... James...kinda like a soft Hawaiian rain huh? Thanks sugar Marsha...I am not a teacher lovie...I write from my heart you know that... you know |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula dearest sister, don't argue with your sister, YOU have a gift dear heart, and I'm soooooo glad I have the best writers to enchant me and encourage me. Now go write, and when you've finished put my name there at the bottom, just so it looks as if I could once write some magic. Now get thee hence and write, write, write. Besides isn't it time to write your ass...ets off. There's so much magic in your pen love you wouldn't miss a little would you? No I thought not? Take care Love and warm stuff Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LMAO Marsha you are sooooo silly girl... Watersign6 Im so sorry I missed your reply before...glad I could heat you up |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Woohoo Paula, you sure said it well. Nice write here as always Sauni Sauni :) |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*DOES A RAIN DANCE* I LOVE this. |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Makes me wish for a good hard......rain |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!! Jenn E |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Saunni...thank you lol...glad you liked it... Temptress...dance on pretty one.... forevernbluejeans...lol...me too JennE....thank you |
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