Open Poetry #14 |
Word Play |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Should one brave dare cave explore true love's source Tap well discover succulent passion uncover Probe, open release treasure palpitate exquisite pleasure Savor molten heat desire heightened sensory over load fire Dwell, linger tender kiss press claim quixotic prize yours, guess... who's in love? ~Tier 5/01 |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What word selections you've made. A feast indeed. Well done here. *Peace. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Spitfire, *smiles* ~Tier |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh I do like this one a lot. Titia |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Fab words you've made good use of in this piece. It gets quite hot too I must say! Good work!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you kindly, Titia & Ethome! :-) ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-28-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I think that is an easy one to answer. I so love reading work from those in love. This was wonderful and very sensual. I loved it. {{{BIG HUGS}}}Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
absolutely loved it |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Startime and Watersign6, I'm glad that you both like! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
how many guesses do I get Tier??? love this one. . . you've played with these words excellently. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You can play with my words anytime ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love it...wonderful write. Poeminister |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sensuous sensations dripping down down down the page |
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