Open Poetry #14 |
For Forever Waits |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~*~ For Forever Waits ~*~My heart and the sky are in sync, Both raging with the same desire. I see him in the distance, And I sense his smile and laughter. His face silhouetted against the light, Finely chiseled, with life, and love Ignites the fire in my soul, Electricity begins flowing through me. I walk on, no purpose and no means, Nowhere really to go, but to him. No one else draws me like he does. And as I walk on deeper, Further into the winding maze of him, There he quietly stands, waiting. A stream of light pours over him, Highlighting his golden hair, and, I shiver in my mind's vision of love. He looks at me and smiles, My heart begins a symphony of love. His face, dynamic, so intriguing, I cannot help but stare. And yet in his deep green eyes, I sense such sadness and loss, This sadness he cannot share. His lost love holds him hostage, And hurt and fear have become the bars, Keeping his love under lock and key. Overwhelmed by desire, But torn by his despair, I wonder more about him, About the pain I see inside. At the very thought I turn away, Unable to bear his suffering. Slowly, with hidden tears, I turn back, And take his weathered hands. Again, he smiles, and I feel his squeeze. There is no hurry, For forever waits. art: Maxfield Parrish "Harvest" music: Frederic Chopin - Raindrops Opus 25, No. 15 ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
forever indeed is always there....it is certainly up to us how we attend to it, and walk towards it.... thank you for this.... |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, Fantastic, a lot to look at in this poem, The picture is great . How did you manage to get the music playing as well, that was cool . The actual poem didn't disapoint, brilliant use of imagery at the start . I'm glad I'm not the only one who has one of those people . Thanks very much . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
My heart and the sky are in sync, Both raging with the same desire. Time is the best healer, love can also help. beautiful words "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I so enjoyed your poem. Joyce |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Another heart melting creation of absolute beauty, Sharon. And yes, forever does, indeed, wait for destined love to embrace it...that is the purpose it holds...and the wait shall be worth the rewards that shall be reaped ~*~eternally~*~ Now that I'm getting all mushy at this early afternoon hour...I'll close with a simple.. "I loved it, and I love ya muches".... Always, dawn |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
such a beautiful read as always Mysteria |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so glad that you all enjoyed this and indeed forever does wait. I think that it is what do, during the time it takes to get there (whatever that is), that really counts...or in other words, "don't sweat the small stuff"! So pleased you liked this one. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Yanno: just give you a picture and a poem ensues to spellbind us. Kewl. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mabe: Yanno I likes me art! Tanks. |
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