Open Poetry #14 |
Cycle Of |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Do we all walk the same trail of life, no, we know it is not beautiful for all there is a piece kept hidden maybe a deep pain of the echo generation somewhere lost in innocent times the dreamer drowns in the dream, as nighttime drifts through glass, unable to burn in the soul, yet it is sketched in the memory of the heart, that for reasons unknown, is sometimes out of control the devotion of words speak for us to share with ghostly voices, that bend in the morning breeze is it a cycle of nature, or a cycle of silence, what becomes of these two forces when the last winds blow and the chill of winter once again sets in, do we stand at the end of the trail looking back, only to go forth in truth, or, does the power of innocence prevail behind the fallen night does your silhouette stand against the wall, or does it search endlessly for the light ****** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there is a piece kept hidden maybe a deep pain of the echo generation somewhere lost in innocent times the dreamer drowns in the dream, as nighttime drifts through glass, unable to burn in the soul, yet it is sketched in the memory of the heart, that for reasons unknown, is sometimes out of control the devotion of words speak for us to share with ghostly voices, that bend in the morning breeze is it a cycle of nature, or a cycle of silence, ====================== behind the fallen night does your silhouette stand against the wall, or does it search endlessly for the light ===================== I dont know what your graphic was... but its not needed... your imagery here and the bittersweet, hauntingly beautiful message stands on its own... and you ask the question that many a soul must answer. enchanting writing L~ me ~~~~~~~~ We are a circle of light unbroken, no questions left to answer ... no emotions left unspoken. We are promise, we are forever, we are lyric, verse, and rhyme ... we are love's definition ... we are destiny's design I'm hanging on your every word |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a beautiful write! Kathleen Blake |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully written poetry! The avenues of perception you use here are very evocative! "when the last winds blow and the chill of winter once again sets in, do we stand at the end of the trail looking back, only to go forth in truth, or, does the power of innocence prevail behind the fallen night does your silhouette stand against the wall, or does it search endlessly for the light" Nice writing, I really enjoyed this piece! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Janet Marie~ thank you for your wisdom....and for your reply...I take it to heart... ~ Irish Rose~ thanks so much.... ~ ethome~ There are so many avenues of perception, one can not possibly answer all in a life time or so I feel....thanks so much for your comment.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Mine always searches for the light, my friend. A very probing piece. Michael Proust- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and the cycle continues. . . this is excellent. . . I love the images that you use here. . . the verse just sings. . . wonderful Lauren. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Michael, I think mine does as well but there days I wonder...thank you... Sven, indeed continues, and sometimes I wonder...if these verses sang to you I did good....thanks so much always... Peace and Hugs to All Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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