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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-05-20 08:42 AM

Birthday Flowers

Distant love yields precious longing
Heart’s belonging, emptiness
More intense is love’s sweet yearning
For a kiss and soft caress

Sad are teardrops of desire
In the blazing sun of day
‘Til the sight upon the doorstep
Of a birthday’s bright bouquet

Every bloom a kiss of pleasure
Every flower a sweet caress
Bringing love so near and present
Filling me with happiness

Flowers are a splendid rainbow
Drying tears of lonely days
Lighting up my eyes with colors
Clearing melancholy haze

Scent of roses, grace of lily
Daisy blooms of joy and peace
Birthday flowers always cheer with
With words of love that never cease

“I love you” in every petal
“Wait for me” on every bloom
“I am with you” whispers to me
In the scent of sweet perfume

Exquisite birthday flowers are
A gift of loving sentiment
They are the gentleness of you
Tender petals, lovely scent

Flowers sent while we’re apart
Reflect the beauty of your heart

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 05-20-2001).]

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-05-20 09:21 AM

What a wonderful birthday - The only thing better would be to spend it together...

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-05-20 09:32 AM

this is beautiful. being someone who loves flowers...I can unstand their power..I agree..it would be better if the one who sent them was the one who handed tham to you.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-05-20 09:33 AM

You're so right you are, here speaks true love. You must be a happy gal.

Titia

He'll be running home soon I hope

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-20 09:40 AM

Elizabeth~
I think that FTD must stand for Flowers That Delight !

And won't our Martie love this one ! !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-05-20 10:21 AM

Elizabeth, I feel the trace of your finger along each petal with this delight...

how good of you to share it with us...

you've even sent the fragrance along...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-20 01:49 PM

Liz, you know that I love this one. . . it blooms with promise. . . just like your words. . .

superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

7 posted 2001-05-20 02:11 PM

Happy birthday, Liz. Hope that it was wonderful....and it sounds like it was.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-05-20 02:29 PM

Happy Birthday, Elizabeth!!! I hope it is your best one ever!!! Enjoy those beautiful flowers, too!!! Beautiful poem!!! I can almost smell them!!!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2001-05-20 02:54 PM

Here it is your birthday, and it is you giving us the gift - your words! I truly hope I will live long enough to say I knew you when you penned this piece on the blue pages (before you become too famous on us), as it is absoutely beautiful! Many happy returns for a wonderful birthday, and my wish for you is that these flowers gets delivered in person next year (or sooner)!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 05-20-2001).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-05-20 03:54 PM

a fellow Gemini! Happy Birthday!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2001-05-20 04:58 PM

Elizabeth,
Lovely words, excellent writing. Sy

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

12 posted 2001-05-20 05:13 PM

Happy birthday Lis, may flowers always guides your path.....love this lovely poem....

((hugs))
Charisma

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

13 posted 2001-05-21 05:57 AM

Such a lovely charming poem...

Regards Liz,
Sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2001-05-21 07:34 AM

Thank you all for each kind comment to this poem.
I'm glad I could share the bouquet with you
Liz

oh2beme
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since 2000-07-24

Posts 215
NV USA

15 posted 2001-05-21 07:43 PM

thank you for sharing this...I too recieved "Birthday Flowers" recently, this just brings it more vivid into memory. Very well written... Love and hugs

Hope you don't mind if I forward this on to my special sweetie, as he is the sender of the flowers.

Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

16 posted 2001-05-21 07:57 PM

This is very beautiful.Happy Birthday!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2001-05-22 03:54 PM

Thank you for sharing your birthday bouquet with us through this beautiful poem. *S* I hope your birthday was a great one!!

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

18 posted 2001-05-22 04:21 PM

"Every bloom a kiss of pleasure
Every flower a sweet caress"

Liz,

You write in ways that I could only dream of. You're such a gifted writer and this poem is yet another fine example of your work. Happy Birthday, my friend. You inspire each of us in so many ways.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

19 posted 2001-05-22 04:25 PM

Elizabeth

This is a very good writing and the imagry is perfect. What a rose.

Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

20 posted 2001-07-09 06:45 PM

Elizabeth, this is precious and please accept my belated wishes for your birthday that I had missed...

You know this verse just touches my heart...
I love you in every petal
Wait for me on every bloom
I am with you whispers to me
In the scent of sweet perfume

Lovely dearPoetFriend
I enjoyed this bouquet very much
*~coco~*

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

21 posted 2001-07-09 06:56 PM

I'm sorry I'm late...happy belated birthday! You spoke about flowers so eloquently...want a job?? I must read this one to Taylor. He will love it as well. Hugs!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

22 posted 2001-07-09 07:10 PM

THank you all for reading and commenting. I was thinking of you, Martie when I wrote it.
Liz

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