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latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

0 posted 2001-05-27 09:01 PM

In my garden of dreams,
where Mother Nature inspires all.
A unicorn can run free,
among friends in time.
For in this land of dreams,
The unicorn is its' guardian;
purest in essence, guarding,
protecting friends' hearts.
It is but the Child of Heart.
Heart of gold and in her hand,
she holds but a mustard seed.
She stops to observe this garden of dreams
and in awe.
Lady of Dreams, Child of Heart,
an auora so bright-
Dress of milky way dust;
holding two books in her arms.
Lady of Dreams, Child of Heart,
gathers hand of childs' gold heart.
Into the Garden of Dreams,
unicorn in tow.
Smiles at child of heart,
making an entry in Passions first book.
Unicorns' mast makes a hole in garden of dreams,
as if to bless.
Child of Heart, Lady of Dreams
opens her hand;
slowly exposing the mustard seed.
The essense of her faith, core of her heart.
Drops the seed, so carefull
in the Garden of Dreams.
Lady of Dreams, Child of Heart
opens the second book,
the Book of Rules, and makes her second entry.
Looks at the Child of Heart,
in silent ackowledgement,
protect the Code of Conduct and what it stands for.
Go in peace, grow and learn.
You're welcomed in my Garden of Dreams.

My faith is but the size my mustard seed. I'll turn the other cheek in my love for mankind - not pride.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-27 09:57 PM

wow. . . now this sounds like somewhere I would love to be. . .

wonderful images lp. . . gently written. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-27 10:15 PM

enjoyed the vivid imagery in this one LP

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-05-27 10:17 PM

I thought this was beautiful and enjoyed it immensely.......Sue

Suetang

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

4 posted 2001-05-27 11:45 PM

~~Sven~~ Humble am I for your reading. Thank you for stopping by.

~~Irish Rose~~ rose grow here in the Passions Gardens. Thank you for the read.

~~Suetang~~ Thank you for your kind comments.

My faith is but the size my mustard seed. I'll turn the other cheek in my love for mankind - not pride.

pamela08
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 27
California,USA

5 posted 2001-05-28 01:13 AM

i admire your writting....looking foward for more of your poetry

true beauty comes from within not from without

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-05-28 01:52 AM

I really thoroughly enjoyed this piece! Wonderful perspective and great writing!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-05-28 07:58 AM

WOW! very enjoyable to read

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-05-28 08:05 AM

A very soft, quiet piece....

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-05-28 11:52 AM

Lady of Dreams, Child of Heart
opens the second book,
the Book of Rules, and makes her second entry.
Looks at the Child of Heart,
in silent ackowledgement,
protect the Code of Conduct and what it stands for.
Go in peace, grow and learn.
You're welcomed in my Garden of Dreams.

stunningly beautiful..*S

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-05-28 01:20 PM

Latin Passion - this is most beautiful, and I read it many times. From the heart with the truest of passion. You also, are welcome in my Garden of Dreams, wherever they may be, and wherever they may take me.....

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2001-05-28 02:02 PM

*sigh* fantasy at it finest and much loved by me. This is a beautiful vision of a place I very much want to be. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I loved every min of it.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

12 posted 2001-05-28 10:16 PM

*** talk about being late in responses -almost didn't get here***

~~Pamela08, thankx.. I hope to write more. I love your signature"true beauty comes from within not from without" thanx

~~Ethome, WOW, thanks for the kind words. I'm definitely a rookie. your words are most kind.

~~Watersign6, an Aquarian?? thanks for for the read.

~~Sunshine, most humble for your reading my poem.
~~nakthoughts, to a beautiful one as well. thanks your the *smiles. I'll make sure to read your poems.
~~Bill, Thanks for the read and reread. Thanks for stopping by my garden.
~~Startime. Your kind comments at its finest. Look forward to reading more of your poems as well.

**well I hope to add to this one - adding myth-animals and such. For I love this land of poetry and it's friends. May you all have sweet dreams and dream of poetry**

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-05-29 06:45 PM

Wonderful garden.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

14 posted 2001-05-30 01:10 AM

~~Interloper; thank you..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2001-06-02 02:54 PM

LatinPassion~
Your garden is resplendent with beauty and kindness.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

16 posted 2001-06-03 05:44 AM

so nicely expressed. I like this very much...

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

17 posted 2001-06-05 08:38 PM

~~Marge~~ My garden is always open. Thank you for reading my poem.

***************

~~Angelbear~~ Thanks for the read. "love the angel bear."

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