Open Poetry #14 |
Not In Her Storm... My very first post and my 500th post |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Not In Her Storm I see the clouds rolling in and oh how it looks like rain And it is always I fight for the welcome change When it rains it pours on this heart of mine So, I take the storms I feel to her each time... But I know she has lived under her own pouring rain Yet under her water her heart still doesn't change She can walk away from what hangs overhead And, not in her storm, are words left unsaid... Not in her storm have I ever felt alone Her storm ends, so I, may find my way home It's for me that she pushes away her own rain So, that I may find comfort in calling her name... She lives in this world for the sake of another's heart God, how she eases the miles when worlds apart And she never wanders when your world falls through Not ever in her storm would she do this to you... She has wings that I know not only I can see Cause only an angel could find strength to carry me It's the way that the eyes can surely view How her heart's written so clearly in what an angel can do... Not in her storm is her work ever done And even in her storm she hands me the sun When her world is dark- I always have light And now how I hold the new color of night... She takes then she gives to an unhappy face So that many can find an awesome place I have been able to love her more every day And with her hand in mine the clouds roll away... Not in any storm that I will ever live beneath Could ever change what I hold here inside of me Not in any of her storms have I lost my angels touch To that angel out there, I love her so much... Sauni Sauni :) |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
As nice the second time around. "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well done...Congratulations! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
CONGRATSSSSSSSSSSSSSS |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ Just beautiful the way angels hold our memories for us ... and bring them to us just when we need most to remember. 'Not in any storm that I will ever live beneath Could ever change what I hold here inside of me Not in any of her storms have I lost my angels touch To that angel out there, I love her so much...' Lovely, sweet lady. Congrats on the milestone. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I missed this the first time through. Glad I caught it this time - a very sweet poem. Congrats on 500. michael |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
incredible and beautiful,also congratulations |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sauni, a repost with great refrain....well done, and congratulations on your milestone... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I missed this the first time too. . . thanks for sharing it with us again. . . and congratulations!!! ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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