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The Passionate One
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The Passionate One |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
The Passionate One She doesn't talk too loud she isn't in with the in crowd you barely hear her sound her minds on fire her hearts so profound inside there's alot goin' on she'll be the passionate one reaching out for something someplace,someone a love she has never known or a place of her own her mind becomes a weapon when her hearts under attack she's never known a father an she aint lookin' back inside there's alot goin' on she'll be the passionate one healing her wounds traveling on her way sometimes she dont have much to say while others talk incessively she wont hear the negative keeps her eyes toward the light walks a little to the left but thats alright inside there's alot goin' on she'll be the passionate one (c)Kelli Kay |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kelli....I know exactly where you are coming from.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"she'll be the passionate one" indeed she will!  Is she a Cancerian? sorry just curious enjoyed Maree |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
thanks for the nice replies umm,nope she is an Aquarious,she meaning me-LOL!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed! Kathleen Blake |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Watersign6 LOLLING with ya ok I was close lol. NOT! Maree |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
A real beauty, thanks for sharing. Titia |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
This was "positively" a joy to read. This will go in my library. My faith is but the size my mustard seed. I'll turn the other cheek in my love for mankind - not pride. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey WS, it's the only way to be!! great poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Irish Rose..thank you Dark Angel..thanks alot Titia..glad you enjoyed it Latin..thanks for the kind words Sven..thank you too ok,so is there anyway to save our favorite poems? Latin,you said this one was going in your folder could you explain,thanks. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Watersign6, when you're on the reply page, it allows you four options just bellow the text board.There you'll find "Add thread to Library" or "Add Poet to Library" Just check the box and TADAAA! Maree |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, this is a beauty and it reminds me so much of the way I felt as a teenager. Too bad it never got any easier with age. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey there Watersign this is a great write! I really enjoyed the read very much! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The quiet are passionate and hold hidden strengths. Awfully good write. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
totaly beautiful, i can identify, so sweet and sad yet dusty like an old hat thats been worn by a good one, thank you for your words Kindly, |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very nicely done! Cor |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This likes me. I don't know much about writing music, but I think this could be a song. LOL! In my eyes at least. Enjoyed. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Dark Angel..thanks for the nice words an also for the help i am going to go try what you said now. Catalina Moon-that was very sweet of you to say,thanks! Ethome..so glad you enjoyed this one too,means alot to me coming from you. Julian-thank you for your kindness. Redheart..many thanks to you. Corinne-thank ya thank ya! Temptress..thanks for reading it an enjoying it too.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was great, I enjoyed it very much....Sue Suetang |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
on some days, i felt like her...well done...one in which we can all relate... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Kelli Kay, you have done it again, so very well indeed...gentle smile |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I loved this!! All writing comes |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Suetang-thank you for reading mine and glad you enjoyed it Faterider-thanks a million! Logan-appreciate your reading this Lonewolf- Walker- thank you thank you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It is in a whisper that we hear the most nicely done |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kelli this was an awesome write hon! really enjoyed reading it. great job. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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