Open Poetry #14 |
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Reading Things In History |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Reading Things In History today I read a conversation in history and who they spoke of was no mystery it was about a princess they called spoiled when I read it I recoiled tears welled up as I read I should have stopped, but I went ahead now I write this with no angry ink but I am pushed to my brink some of what was said, didn’t have the facts straight just went along in create I copied it and sent it to a friend for safe keeping in case I needed it later for repeating this is the true glory there are two moral’s to this story……. Be careful what you write and what you have said For you just don’t know by whom it may be read and Don’t clean up someone else’s house When your house is a mess "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-26-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Nice write, but I keep believing in the good nature of the human race and sometimes it becomes easier to clean up your own mess after you've cleaned up someone else's house. Titia |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
words to live by. . . well written helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
secong one ive read of yours an i loved both your very good 1slicklady.. ![]() |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Good lessons here...fortunately for me, I don't clean anyone's house, even my own. Ha! |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Helen, Sometimes finding things out on your own are better for you. You learn more. g-hm |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Good one. Melton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's good advice in the ending and it carries the rest of the poem to a good conclusion!! Good work! |
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