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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-27 07:22 AM

A Loving, Knew

I deed myself to you in love
a "once upon a time"
I need myself in love today
and fill my thoughts with rhyme.
I overflow my consciousness
with wants of long ago.
Then unmet expectations rise,
to dim my brightest glow.

I still hold onto bits of you,
the aura that surrounds.
Those special moments, promised words
that touched me, still confound.
At times I see that spark again,
in aging, wistful eyes.
Until, the truth does show it's face
and memory plays it's lies.

If onlys, seem to shatter peace
this heart in turmoil, twists.
Wringing out the last of tears
and hopefulness in mist.
What sometimes seems like olden times
is just a fade-in-thought.
When eyes set eyes upon the one
whose love had mine, once caught.

I seek within my own, this morn
the innerness I need.
Will fill my life with loving me,
be selfish in my deed.
Sighing, I shall take this day
and contemplate my view,
Remembering that once upon
a time, a loving, knew.

~Wynter
*sorry one of those reflective mornings

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-27-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-05-27 07:29 AM

                "I still hold onto bits of you,
                 the aura that surrounds.
                 Those special moments, promised words
                 that touched me, still confound.
                 At times I see that spark again,
                 in aging, wistful eyes.
                 Until, the truth does show it's face
                 and memory plays it's lies."

That's beautiful poetry Wynter. Memory certainly does play it's lies. I love the reflective nature of the write....keep up the good work!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-05-27 07:30 AM

Wynter,
you can reflect so poetically on any given morning and this is no exception.

I love the way you string musings together to create jewels.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-05-27 07:47 AM

Good Morning Ethome...I have missed you huggzz

Both you and

Kethry sure know how to bring a smile to a face on another dreary day..thank you Both...

Maureen/Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-27 03:06 PM

Wynter~
This is marvelous musing !
I thoroughly enjoy the thinking that gives insight
to the facets of one's reflection.
Nice !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-27 03:08 PM

This is lovely, Maureen, just so sad though....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-05-28 06:12 AM

Marge and Kathleen...thank you both..yes I am reflecting..a day in passing, passing thoughts from yesteryear..Kathleen it was a very sad day..but maybe it was for a reason huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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