We Realise (rewrite) (In better verse)

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Open Poetry #14

We Realise (rewrite) (In better verse)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-05-25 06:59 PM

We realise our mistakes,
So won't you start all over again,
Iam waiting for you
to love me again,
Because we realise our mistakes,
We realise what we have done?
So what are we waiting for?
Come to me
and love me again,
It's started to rain now,
Since we know ,
That love is all we got,
And we should realise that,
love Is what we needed
We belong to one another,
Once in while,
mistakes comes into our life,
So let us settle this mistake
we make
And let us take our hands,
And let us love again,
We should realise our mistakes,
We realise......

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-25-2001).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-25 10:25 PM

but is it too late sometimes my friend??

this is excellent. . .

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