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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-07-10 11:50 AM

Has night come so quickly?
for you've disappeared without trace
taking with you sunrises & sunsets
the true colors of love
tho night too, can be beautiful
what it is without the heat of you
to share it's glories
for the moon & stars fade
in eyes weeping loss...

~Tier
7/01

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-10 11:52 AM

the queen of romance strikes again...

RT always..yes always enjoy your words...

glad to see you around!!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-10 11:59 AM

Tier....the cry is quite audible....

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-10 12:22 PM

night has come indeed,
but only for the moment
even tho the dark may seem lonely
the cool of me remains to comfort you
to let you know that
dawn comes

Sorry Tier, I just get inspired when I read your work . . . this was wonderful. . . we could indeed begin to call you The Queen of Romance

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-10 12:37 PM

night has come my love
remember the heat of us
for I shall return
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Forgive me, too, please.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-07-10 12:45 PM

Thank you, Captain. As always, your words cheer me. *smiles*

Sunshine, who can remain sad in your light? *smiles* Thank you for reading...

Sven, Thank you for the lovely words... *smiles*

Interloper, simply... beautiful...

~Tier

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-07-10 06:46 PM

This is nice Tiersden...James

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2001-07-10 10:46 PM

Tiersdin, very very beautiful. The whole piece, and the last line is love weeping.

Parker

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-07-11 06:44 AM

THe emptiness of being left alone is so well expressed in this poem....well done!

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