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Sorrow's Meditations |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 Timeless assurances wrought hold little light To the sting of mourning hearts... Promise rainbows left to embrace are of less significance Than the present anguish... Where is the intensity of the first light? Why has the beauty of morning faded? How could a sunset be more compelling than these cries? What is the sense in another beginning? Timeless assurances wrought mean everything To the healing of mourning hearts... Promise rainbows left to embrace are cherished more Than the sorrow of this present moment... The intensity of first light is in the eye of the departed... The beauty of morning rises in the hearts of the beloved... A sunset lasts just long enough to carve hope out of frozen tears... Many more beginnings rely on the comfort of infinity’s oath... -kh 07/09/01 it was love that first drew me, it is love that will keep me here... now I see love burning brightly when everything else is unclear... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Timeless assurances wrought mean everything To the healing of mourning hearts... Promise rainbows left to embrace are cherished more Than the sorrow of this present moment... The intensity of first light is in the eye of the departed... The beauty of morning rises in the hearts of the beloved... A sunset lasts just long enough to carve hope out of frozen tears... Many more beginnings rely on the comfort of infinity’s oath... ======================== as someone who has spent the last year and a half keeping butterfly promises... this poem touches me in places deep, and reminds me of the reasons and the promised seasons... this is beautiful Kris...and needed on this night... timing is everything *S* Thank you, jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How absolutely beautiful, and your words touched me this evening. I especially loved these lines: A sunset lasts just long enough to carve hope out of frozen tears... Many more beginnings rely on the comfort of infinity’s oath... I shall read this tonight to someone very special, and thank you. If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Now this is a rainbow in every way, wow! Thank you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely written... I enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Snowpants....it is so good to see you writing again....it's been too long! And this! is a delight! |
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