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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2001-07-09 07:43 PM

In the Window of the Morning

In the window of the morning
the sky weeps light
and dusts the air with powdered glisten

I breathe and there is movement
as currents of my life make patterns
above the bed

I whisper the word love
and watch a cartwheel ripple
across the room
as it whirls against the bright
frame of the door

I see amazing weight
in this dusty early gleaning
as if the day caught me and held me
in a minute
gave it to me to open some understanding

Life is fragile with responsibility
for the air around it waits for purpose
and when life is gone
the room will wither
the air will loose its grace

and even the wind that sweeps the sidewalk
cannot change that

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-07-09 08:02 PM

I see amazing weight
in this dusty early gleaning
as if the day caught me and held me
in a minute
gave it to me to open some understanding

Life is fragile with responsibility
for the air around it waits for purpose
and when life is gone
the room will wither
the air will loose its grace

and even the wind that sweeps the sidewalk
cannot change that

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might I quietly and respectfully say...I love the way your poetic mind works.
thank you for this...its touches deep
heart hugs
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2001-07-09 08:24 PM

"Life is fragile with responsibility
for the air around it waits for purpose..."

... a Gaia way of thinking? perhaps.

Martie, please continue to share with us your poetic view of the world. It is most interesting and enjoyable.

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2001-07-09 08:29 PM

life does indeed create movement that cannot be duplicated by its absence...your words and thoughts are, once again, perfect....

Balladeer

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4 posted 2001-07-09 08:29 PM

life does indeed create movement that cannot be duplicated by its absence...your words and thoughts are, once again, perfect....

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-09 09:24 PM

"Life is fragile with responsibility
for the air around it waits for purpose
and when life is gone
the room will wither
the air will loose its grace"

I love those lines, Martie. So true and so well expressed.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-07-09 09:45 PM

Martie, YOU are a wonderful poet!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-07-09 10:08 PM

I breathe and there is movement
as currents of my life make patterns
above the bed

I whisper the word love
and watch a cartwheel ripple
across the room
as it whirls against the bright
frame of the door
===========================

came back to put this gift of verse in my library..

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2001-07-09 10:51 PM

Another fantastic work of art from your pen, Martie...your talent is amazing...great write...

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

9 posted 2001-07-09 11:49 PM

"Life is fragile with responsibility
for the air around it waits for purpose"

those lines and the last two of this piece are priceless........

wonderful writing

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-07-10 01:49 AM

Doreen picked my lines, Martie I loved this one, and I agree, let's have more of your view of the world in general. Fantastic writing as usual.

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
~* Mysteria *~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2001-07-10 08:35 AM

quote:
Life is fragile with responsibility
for the air around it waits for purpose
and when life is gone
the room will wither
the air will loose its grace

I have seen these moments....

Martiesque, indeed....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-07-10 09:23 AM

Martie~

'I whisper the word love
and watch a cartwheel ripple
across the room
as it whirls against the bright
frame of the door'

May you always be dizzied with the thrill of love flipping cartwheels.

Lovely, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-07-10 10:35 AM

Beautiful.

passing shadows
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displaced

14 posted 2004-04-28 04:11 AM

I'm in awe of you!

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