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Open Poetry #14

Diagnosis

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-09 05:41 PM

in unrestrain
you flailed in life
I mistook it
for insanity
for I did not see
that glint of gladness
perceiving only
what might be
conceived
by those who
grieve ~

                         madness
                         side by side
                         with
                         sadness

damn those pretenders
that taught me before
as only now

I hear your
close of door

for it is I who
lie here,
in state of
mad

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-07-09 09:33 PM

I know that feeling *s
huggs Lady W

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-10 08:02 AM

interesting poem... like the sound of madness side by side with sadness...
and enjoy the ending lines a great deal..

nice stretch...

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2001-07-10 08:12 AM

I can relate.. I can relate.. I can relate...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-10 10:17 AM

Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Not your usual fare.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-28 04:11 AM

understood

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