Open Poetry #14 |
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Memories Of You |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I sit in my childhood home My mind begins to roam Resting on a distant day When my happiness went away I look around this room Silent as your tomb My heart begins to ache As my hands begin to shake Tears fill my eyes Amidst questions of why Memories now abound Swirling round and round Coming from deep within The agony begins I wish you were here To calm all my fears Oh what I've been through And all without you You were my friend Until the very end I miss you so much The love in your touch Remembering your last hug Gives my heart a sad tug I loved you so Yet you had to go I send you this prayer With the utmost care Mom, please know Wherever I may go A small part of you Lives in all I do Your memory lives on Long after you've gone Of the things you taught None of which for naught I send you my love To heaven above Where you reside As an angelic guide I know you're there And that you care I feel your presence here Still so very near So long for now In reverence I bow To she who gave me life Under the surgeon's knife All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-08-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
((hugss)) ~Wynter |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
What a beautifully written poem, full of love and sadness. I could relate so easily to this as I lost my father to cancer 2 years ago. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, LW, most gentle smile..it is always so hard, but thankfully we have those memories to help sustain us..my best thoughts to you.. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Though I can't relate to the reality of this...I can tell you that as a child, losing my mother was my single greatest fear. And I see by your poem that it was justified. I could see you sitting there... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful tribute filled with love and respect! Very warm and enjoyable read! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful.....heartwrenched. Thank you for sharing this wonderful keeper. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW thank you for this today. you and i share the same heart/soul it seems. thank you for writing what i try to say. this was just beautiful hon! and yes you are right...she IS there...take care. *hugs* amy ![]() "but i see your true colors, |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful tribute ... |
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