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Jonathon A. Lowry
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 38


0 posted 2001-07-08 06:57 PM


It is a land with neither night or day
No heat, no cold, not any wind, no rain,
no hills, no valleys, but one even plain.
stretches for miles and miles away.
while the sluggish air a twilight grey.
no moons or seasons, no life or pain,
no crops, no food, to barren for even one ounce of grain.
no ripple on the sea, no shifting sand.,
no beating of wings to stir the silent space.
no pulse of life through all the loveless land.
and loveless sea, no trace of days before
no guarded home, no safe resting place
no future hope, no fear for evermore

              MY MIND



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MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2001-07-08 07:38 PM


Maybe it's time to read a good book, watch a good film, listen to a powerful song, smell the aroma of nature while hiking in it, and eat something tasty...?  Then perhaps the mindscape may acquire some new inspirations...?

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
2 posted 2001-07-09 04:20 PM


Dark and brooding, hope there is a silver lining...

Corinne

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