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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Other Ring Closely vapor rings the moon, Though once, In May or early June I heard a distant halo sing A lovely song, but crystalline. RMW |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many good poets, so many wonderful poems, but you always seem to walk away with the Wow Award.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is so superbly visual and even a bit haunting, in a beautiful way btw, I posted one that reminded Cpat of your writing...that is exciting to me, I hope to you...it's "Afternoon Respite" on I wrote last year |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob--You do this so well, again and again..yes, wow! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful...and definitely a tad haunting...  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, I can see this one Bob. . . it's very well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Bob! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(clapping) YES!!! This is how it is done!!! and you... you do it consistantly... wonderful to be able to read your words Bob... always a pleasure in my book.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Superb! BRAVO! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It's crystal clear to me, Bob. This is lovely. Cor |
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