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Time heals nothing
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Aching thoughts of you and me longing for the fantasy holding on to memories wherefore art eternity? Yesteryear held crystal days magic moments where we laid under star filled nights we played nothing like that love we made. Still, you're just a passing thought inner storm that I have fought so much sorrow that you wrought all my love was just for naught. |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Wow, that was amazing. I love the way you use your words, you seem to have a natural talent for rhyming. I guess there are some things that even time can't heal. God Bless, Jeremy |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Love is never for "naught". You will have all those fantasies, and sometime soon. You are too dear and beautiful to not have those wonderful experiences. You know I am rooting for you... Love, Elise |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ditto with Elise, Sandra. A very fluid write, but I'd reiterate the fact that there are no mistakes as long as we choose to learn from them, and as long as we can appreciate the positive in all that's happened to us, we're that much better for it. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully said! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
White Dragon and Walker, thanks so much. Elise, you know what I mean here  Mark.of course it wasn't really for naught, but it makes a good poem LOL (I always learn from my mistakes, so I can do bigger and better mistakes later) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Boy, do I know how this feels! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes i know what you mean sandra..they say better to have loved than not to have loved at all...whoever said that ha..must have been crazy ha...hugss... ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wellllll, maybe somethings? |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Related all too well. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Enjoyed the read. |
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