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WhiteDragon
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since 2001-07-07
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0 posted 2001-07-08 11:40 PM


What happened to what we had,
and why are we always so mad, at each other...
How did our love disappear,
and when did you start to care for another...
    I thought what we had would last forever,
    I still feel the magic when we're together,
    Girl what we had, it was always so strong,
    And i can't figure out, just where we went wrong.
What is it that I can't see,
you said that you'd always love me, for all time...
i guess i should just move on,
but everything seems so wrong, when you're not mine...
   The times that we had still shine in my heart,
   without you i'm lost, there's no where to start,
   love, what we had, it was always so strong,
   and i can't figure out just where we went wrong.
so what should i do now,
no point in asking how, when love's done...
tonight, alone, i lay,
how can i face a day, with no sun...
   i guess in a way, my life is through,
   they day that you left, my soul went with you,
   girl, what we had, i thought it was strong,
   i thought love was true, i guess i was wrong...

God Bless, Jeremy



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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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1 posted 2001-07-09 12:21 PM


No point in asking how, when loves's done...sure got that right.  Very heartfelt write!
catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-07-09 07:54 AM


Jeremy, I have felt this way exactly. Somehow things do go on, and sometimes even get happy again!
Very sweet and tender poem of questioning.
Sandra

WhiteDragon
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since 2001-07-07
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3 posted 2001-07-09 10:45 AM


Thanks a lot JLR and Catalina.  I wrote this awhile back...but don't worry, i'm happy now  
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