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JLR
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0 posted 2001-07-08 02:32 AM


True Intent

It’s not that I love you any less than I did
a few months ago, it’s just that I am so tired
and it has caused me to divulge rash thoughts
in the middle of the night
when all I meant to say
was I still love you, quietly


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Severn
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1 posted 2001-07-08 02:48 AM


this reminds me of someone...can't remember who - someone's style...famous poet lol...

I like this very much JLR...very very much...

a nice slice of a moment, if such a thing is possible...

K

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-07-08 08:39 AM


Those rash thoughts need a topical ointment....I feel I know exactly what you mean by this!

Good job!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-08-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-07-08 08:58 AM


JLR,
Enjoyed the read.

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-09 09:50 AM


I love the last line in particular
WhiteDragon
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since 2001-07-07
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5 posted 2001-07-09 10:52 AM


JLR, great writing.  Very inspiring, keep it up.  Jeremy
ParisGrl
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6 posted 2001-07-09 12:52 PM


R.J.

I really enjoyed this....short but to the point....i hope it all works out for you.  e-mail me sometime.

Laura

walker
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since 2001-02-11
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7 posted 2001-07-09 01:03 PM


You know your true intent,but when our bodies are tired sometimes we "divulge" the wrong things. Rest and take care. Great expression of true emotions.
Waseem Cheema
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Pakistan
8 posted 2001-07-09 02:18 PM


Smiles.......very nice
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