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True Intent |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
True Intent It’s not that I love you any less than I did a few months ago, it’s just that I am so tired and it has caused me to divulge rash thoughts in the middle of the night when all I meant to say was I still love you, quietly |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
this reminds me of someone...can't remember who - someone's style...famous poet lol... I like this very much JLR...very very much... a nice slice of a moment, if such a thing is possible...  K |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those rash thoughts need a topical ointment....I feel I know exactly what you mean by this! Good job! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-08-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JLR, Enjoyed the read. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love the last line in particular  |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
JLR, great writing. Very inspiring, keep it up. Jeremy |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. I really enjoyed this....short but to the point....i hope it all works out for you. e-mail me sometime. Laura |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You know your true intent,but when our bodies are tired sometimes we "divulge" the wrong things. Rest and take care. Great expression of true emotions. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Smiles.......very nice |
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