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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Clear the sighs you whisper for a star fallen yearning calling searching askance for that warmth to bask in but in haste laid waste to delicate impression forming tornado whirl grab,no warning this star did shine bright but not quite you, in search of a different light, in the dark of night dare thee meditate then fabricate before too late & nerve is lost done then! but without counting cost disillusioned illuminary shines but shall never pine for thine has proven to be unworthy, unworthy, UNWORTHY! ~Tier 7/01 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
unworthy not shining star I did seek thee and thou shalt always shine in the light of love for I have sought thee, and will still do so. . . wonderful Tier. . . tender. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, sometimes it happens that way...but this did trickle down the page like dreams, looking... well done, Tier.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Write on. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
as if from love to loss, tears dripping down the page with anguish and perhaps anger in the end, from profound hurt...did I get it right? |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The intensity of this is amazing. Great write! |
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