Open Poetry #14 |
Wolf of Legend Past |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The wolf will come on hearing the call, Gliding alone over all different soil. All he heard was one who was lost, So hastening on, at whatever the cost. Buried in legends of long time past The ancient one knew when the die was cast. The gamble of life is not a game, For one walks not from the table, ever the same. Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose, How you accept is the way you choose. When bitter tears steam down from the face, The wolf will come upon the chase. The thrill of the hunt is not his plan He knows a soul needs a helping hand The one so lost will hear a tune, Of a lonely howl echoing off the moon. All so cold, knowing of nothing to do, Sitting on the pathway, unable to move Exhausted with the burden of bitter pain, Praying to dream peaceful once again. Dropping in silence in troubled sleep, Never knowing the wolf would curl in safety keep. Warmth from the contact removed the chill, As seeds were dropped, not needed to till. Waking refreshed on the sunny morn, To begin walking the path, feeling reborn. Striding ahead with hand at the side, Thinking a dream thought of a wolf which did glide. Suddenly the troubles seemed not so tough As the hand seemed to feel a very soft ruff. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So that is how it began....thank you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Guardian Companions they are ! *very gentle smiles* Most gentle read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sissie, began or begins,only a matter of perspective, is it not?..very gentle smile Marge, very gentle smile, well, I do believe you are right, a protector, also, I believe the legends so say. Thank you for the smiles..gentle smile |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Wolves are such interesting creatures. Much maligned I fear! I enjoyed your poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--Many things to learn from places never dreamed. I really enjoyed your poem! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah, a new legend from the storyteller. . . well done my friend. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Logan, I often write as Sisterwolf and I respect their society greatly, so this caught my attention. May I ever so tenderly render this one thought: Sometimes rhyme gets in the way of rhythm. If you are a 'wolfman', you would enjoy Isshah's site. Go in search. She has a terrific wolf gallery. theLadypoet "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Roosevelt |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, I think this is a wonderful legend, which may indeed have some truth in it. You are a consummate storyteller. Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Logan I thought this was wonderfully written, I enjoyed it immensely. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Logan...gives a whole new meaning to" a wolf at the door"...excellent my friend |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Trillium, thank you for your commments, and yes, they do have a certain style to them..gentle smile Ahh, Martie, I am glad I could show you something of another time and place then..gentle smile Sven, thank you for your always thoughtful words, my friend, and let me congratulate you on your 10,000 post..a wonderful accomplishment..gentle smile Ladypoet, thank you for the link, and for your comments..being a fledging poet, I can use all the help I can find..and I have been referred to as Wolf, in another time and place. Thank you for being here..gentle smile Ahh, Sandra, very gentle smile. I am glad you enjoyed this, as I enjoy bringing some of this out.. Sue, gentle smile, you always give such a nice reply. Thank you for being here with your thoughts. Ahh, Paula, Thank you for your read, and yes, it does, doesn't it?, Your kind words are always appreciated..gentle smile |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...Logan, this gave me a new perspective, it did. You have quite a winsome way with words, reads like a gentle smile-- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautifully written, Logan... I like this very much! |
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