Open Poetry #14 |
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Imprisoned Chains |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC ![]() |
"Inprisoned Chains" You've created this life of yours A life that is now a living hell Imprisoned by your own chains It's up to you to free yourself from this "cell" It was you who pushed me away With your lies and endless game You now ask me for a second chance My answer is no...You have only yourself to blame The hurt you've caused me deep inside Is like a poison that threatens to eat at me Though I thought I had put it all to rest It's impossible though, you won't set me free Stop pulling me down under the water I refuse to drown along with you in misery Finding true love Has finally loosened the reins you once had on me This poison of yours is all consuming It engulfs another like flames of a fire For you it's now or never...do or die Time for you to walk the wire Take all your shattered promises Cast them like ashes in the air My heart is heavy full of pain from you The last bit of love I had for you--is no longer there Why did you do this...cause me such tremendous pain I don't think there's anything mentally wrong with you That's just another excuse For you to be able to continue to do what you do To think I once loved you With every part of me inside I allowed you into my life From you I didn't hide You shredded my soul Like a butcher does with fresh meat But I refused to give in To allow myself to end in self-defeat I pushed onward and upward The love I now have is deep and true She loves me with all of her I'm afraid to say she is nothing like you You would be wise to look up to her She could teach you a thing or two about love But if you don't do something quick, in hell you will remain We'll be watching down from high above I don't know why I still care for your well fare I should just say to hell with it all Guess once you were my angel It's hard to watch you to continue to fall But fallen Angel you are However no longer my concern Now living without me perhaps you finally can comprehend As your heart lives in constant burn AMK July 7 2001 "but i see your true colors, shining through... i see your true colors and that's why i love you" ~phil collins~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
WAY TO GO!!! Amy/Aim..stick to your guns, nice job, and yet compassionate both..very well done..proud of you..very gentle smile |
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Jonathon A. Lowry Junior Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 38 |
strong feelings strong words brought a tear to my eye no sh*t. i really feel sorry for the significant other that this poem was written about because thay lost a good person very beautiful great visuals A+ IN MY BOOK HE HE jonathon |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes you have to walk away. . . but, make sure that you're seeing things right. . . powerful words. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Darling girl such words of wisdom, such a strong and yet compassionate message. You did do all you could darling girl, that the giftmis refused doesn't reflect on the giver. utterly utterly fabulous writing Take care love and warm stuff Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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