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......Missing You...............
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......Missing You............... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I find myself missing you..... wondering... wandering thoughts random rememberances of things you said to me of the way you pulled truths from my soul things I never meant to share with anyone .......least of all myself....... loving you, yes, loving you knowing damn well I wasn't allowed to need you that way to want you that way to feel you that way..... so I let go closing off a part of myself that never should have been opened knowing I wasn't any more special to you than the next....... and having found strength in telling you good-bye doesn't change the fact that I find myself ......missing you ~SEA~ 8:45am 6-29-01 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I could probably say many things about this from a personal level..past experiences and people I have known... I could...but won't. What I will say is that it touched me in a way that I thought I couldn't be... Thanks for sharing it... Thanks for the memories it brought and the tenderness it brought to mind... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very tender, SEA. I can empathize with these feelings. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Goodness....what Captain said...and what Mark said.... and then just, thanks, from me.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I find myself missing you..... wondering... wandering thoughts random rememberances of things you said to me of the way you pulled truths from my soul things I never meant to share with anyone .......least of all myself....... loving you, yes, loving you knowing damn well I wasn't allowed to need you that way to want you that way to feel you that way..... ================================ knowing I wasn't any more special to you than the next....... and having found strength in telling you good-bye doesn't change the fact that I find myself ......missing you ========================== Well baby..why dont ya just slap me with a mirror.... you already know this one hits me in places deep.... we'd like to believe in our hearts that we were as special to them as they were to us... but the silence speaks volumes dont it?? yeah...I know...its damn deafening.... ya know me girlie...me thinks we need to take a couple NO-MOTH pills and go lay on the beach and let the sun burn us instead of the flame...whatta ya think? You bring the frisbe..Ill bring the raspberry tea  hugs Sus...I keep telling myself it gets easier with time...and rhyme... mothy denial baby  jmWe're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ah, this is so tender and true to life The longing remains long after the last goodbye Like it very much Liz |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cpat Hair~ wow....I think that is one of the best replies I've ever recieved  thank youMark~ thanks Lady~ thank you Janet~ I knew you'd get this.....I knew you'd know yeah, I got the frisbee and the Margaritas babeee no sun block.....I need the burn.....just keep the blue flames at bay eh? LOL maybe I'll just go for a walk today.......(thanks)~SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Liz very much |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Well that's the way it is. Good write enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ In quiet walks ... we find ourselves among the memories. Treasured thoughts, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I also have someone that was able to open a part of me I didn't know existed. I miss her as well. This was very introspective, sad, sweet and showed much strength, gentle one. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sometimes true one cannot admit loving you loving him complete admission baring soul find the truth in frank discussion openly Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quietly loving. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Sea, but I identified with this one. The memories surface in the walks, and you have brought to mind memories long buried, but it is time to walk them off, thank you for this one. By the way, I think this is one of your very best, and I shall save this one, thank you. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
SEA... That was awesome... It hit me right there... know what I mean? I know where you are coming from... Felt it too many damn times...What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
SEA I am too missing you very much.....but what can I do.....I am very busy in studies now a days......... LOlOI love to nice poetry. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Wow, does that bring back some long ago memories... Girl, you have touched me greatly with this piece. I love it, every part of it. Thank you. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey you and Cpat Hair only showered the once how can you miss him that much already? Of course I'm only jealous! Very nice write Sea ...full of longing and reflection ....and a bit spicy too!! good stuff! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this feeling well...for I am missing someone special this very moment...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely verse, SEA. All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Went back to read this... and find it still touches me... in part personal experience, but I think mainly because it captures well the feelings... just had to let you know... |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is beautiful read Sea I'm not sure, but this might be the first one of your's that I've read You express such feelings in your poem I hope to read more of your work Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sea...this one hit home for me...been there done that! hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
"I find myself missing you..... wondering... wandering thoughts" Remember wandering thoughts are not good plz bind ur thoughts really i am also miss u nice work |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
SEA-- Susan, wow! are u reading the insides of me off a script somewhere? this one HIT home...excellent write, touches deep. one of my favorites of yours. take care. amy "but i see your true colors, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh how I can hear you, as you translated these feelings so well.... and .....that's why I love your poetry so much. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Very, very good write SEA. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..this one sends chills down me..more than one! this couldve come from my own soul, my own pen..but what a wonderful job youve done..describing the feelings, the moments of missing that someone..something, apparently, many of us have been through... to the library with this.. great job sea.. hugs, g "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oops..forgot my library button....  |
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