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Open Poetry #14

Confused

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2001-07-07 10:35 PM

frustrated I look at you
weeping on the inside
pleading with my head
feeling with my heart.
Could this be the day,
could this be the day that I
blow you away.

Twisted with hatred
this is my forgotten
hell. (shattered voices yell)

your eyes drip with
sympathy, i wipe it away
with a smile to let you
know that i am quietly
sane.

Stuck in web of rage
Let me out of my CAGE.
Let me be ok.
Let me go insane.

I'm going to lay my head
down.
Please don't let me drown
away in
my dreams.

[This message has been edited by BirdeeB (edited 07-07-2001).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-07-08 11:50 AM

it's easy to see why you're this way. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Qumar Fatthi
Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 59
Pakistan

2 posted 2001-07-09 03:49 PM

Ohhhhhhhhhhh Dear!
don't confused ............lolo
be brave .........
u r wrtting good poem......
ha haa hhaa hh aa.....

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-07-09 04:01 PM

Stuck in web of rage
Let me out of my CAGE.
Let me be ok.
Let me go insane.

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Your confusion and hurt seem all but tangible.......

A good write.........I enjoyed it

Thank you
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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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