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Up From Thunder Mountain
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Up From Thunder Mountain |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Up From Thunder Mountain ~*Marge Tindal*~  Out across the valley in view of all who know rises Thunder Mountain, from visions of long ago Rumbling when Earth Mother cries in lament of pain Up from Thunder Mountain the voices come again Spewing forth the messages, spoken from ancient tongue Up from Thunder Mountain, a new prophecy has begun Like lava from the belly of the not-forgotten layers Pouring down the mountain side, burning with aware Saying the time has come for our voices to be heard Up from Thunder Mountain, molten in spirited word Mother Earth we hear the cries, cratered deep distress Time to scale the mountain of your painful duress Time to draw the waters from wells of knowledge deep A new day is upon us, no more the mountain sleeps We must save the earth from her misery of plight Down from Thunder Mountain - Rainbow Warriors in unite - (¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸) ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thunder on.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 As always, Marge, you impress!Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is really impressive! Another winner! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ The spirit voices are thundering~ Thank you for listening. Melissa~ Thank you always for your kind thoughts. BettyLou~ I appreciate that you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Spewing forth the messages, spoken from ancient tongue Up from Thunder Mountain, a new prophecy has begun Like lava from the belly of the not-forgotten layers Pouring down the mountain side, burning with aware Saying the time has come for our voices to be heard ------------------------------- I love this. *S* But the poem's power doesn't come with the noise of thunder... it seeps into the soul with truth's conviction... and opens hearts to listen. *S* Beautifully written! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This truly does go right for the "conscience" and it hit its mark! However, it also puts me in mind of Mount St. Helen's out here when she blew and said her piece to all who listened, and trust me they finally listened. Strong, powerful reminder Marge, and you get an "A+", he he  If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your usual very good. *L* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh well ((sigh)) mountains... The only mountains I see overhere are the little heaps of the moles all over my garden  How can i not enjoy your writings. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
loved your work on this one. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, a splendid write, I applaud you. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Agreed with "Melissa Honeybee " Very impressssssssssssive |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-- "We must save the earth from her misery of plight" I hear you!! |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Very nice, how true. Poor mother earth...God bless, Jeremy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Thank you so very, very much for your comments. Open and listening am I. Mysteria~ Doesn't surprise me of your reference to Mount St. Helen's ... I thought of her also as I penned this. Seymour~ I simply must try harder.  Titia~ Oh my ... to give you a look at a mountain is my pleasure, sweet lady. GHM~ Thank you so much. Gemini~ I humbly thank you. Waseem~ Greatly appreciate your reply. Martie~ Yes ... one mountain at a time - the world MUST hear~ WhiteDragon~ Thank you so much. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Time to draw the waters from wells of knowledge deep ============== As you draw verse from your deep well of inspiration. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Oh ... it is a well so deep Inspiration fairly seeps From the ink of visions rising Quilled with hope on new horizons~ Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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