Open Poetry #14 |
Love Through Nature |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thrive just like a flower In the garden of your love I become the brightest star In your constellation high above How recklessly I dive Into your sensual sea The enormous waves of desire How they wash right over me You're my oasis in the desert Such a welcoming sight you are I have climbed the peaks of your passion And wished upon your shooting star You're the pillow where I lay After travelling many paths You and I together have discovered The finest love to forever last Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And may all of nature sing your harmony...enjoyed, Sue.... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Into your sensual sea The enormous waves of desire How they wash right over me I love this. Beautiful imagery! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Nature, love and innerself,,what could be more merging..Such a very nice job, Sue,,loved the read...gentle smile |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
nothing like this. . . well done. . . a perfect portrait. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your lovely words, they are always so very much appreciated. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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