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Toyy
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2001-07-06 04:58 PM



Awakened by you

Have I written you before?
Have you been my inspiration?
In my dreams you were there
When I awoke you were gone
I’ve seen you now
I always have known you were there
Learning~waiting~wanting
Real
Believing
True love exists
Only a taste have I had
The hunger so real
Never satisfied
Now
You have aroused my passion
Your kisses
Filled me with desire
To become one with you
To taste you
To hold you
To need you
Dreams come true
If we let go of the past
How long have I been sleeping
To be awakened by you
You have lit a fire in my heart
Let me share the warmth
Free to love
Free to want
Wanting nothing in return
But a chance
To enjoy this awakening

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Cpat Hair
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Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-06 05:08 PM


Enjoy it!!! Nicely written...and I enjoyed the read.


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with you
2 posted 2001-07-06 05:20 PM


"Dreams come true
If we let go of the past
How long have I been sleeping
To be awakened by you "


what a beautiful way to say you are in love  

Toyy
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 16
Reno Nv.
3 posted 2001-07-06 08:39 PM


Thanks to both of you for the replies, it's sometimes hard to tell someone just how much you love them, although showing them is much more easy...and believable, hava a great weekend...
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