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Soul of Ode
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Soul of Ode |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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2/7/2001 SOUL OF ODE Tum chunda mahtaab ho ya ho koe kanwal You are a moon,Sun or you are a lotus Tum chodween ka chand ho ya ho koe Mahal You are a full moon or you are a palace Tumhain Raat khoon ya khoon tumhain saher I call you a night or call you a dawn Tum sabhi kuch to ho aay janay gazal You are evrything, O soul of my ode ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just the love the structure of your verse. Very simple, but so expressive, Waseem. A touching tribute to the muse. Your love of poetry shows my friend!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
love the way this says so much with so little... very enjoyable... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is a lovely poem of love and it is impressive to see your language and English together. Very nice! Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Waseem- this is absolutely beautiful. a wonderful write..  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
sweet like the poet |
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