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Waseem Cheema
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0 posted 2001-07-02 01:07 PM


2/7/2001

JANAY GAZAL
SOUL OF ODE

Tum chunda mahtaab ho ya ho koe kanwal
You are a moon,Sun or you are a lotus
Tum chodween ka chand ho ya ho koe Mahal
You are a full moon or you are a palace

Tumhain Raat khoon ya khoon tumhain saher
I call you a night or call you a dawn
Tum sabhi kuch to ho aay janay gazal
You are evrything, O soul of my ode


~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-07-02 01:12 PM


I just the love the structure of your verse.
Very simple, but so expressive, Waseem. A touching tribute to the muse. Your love of poetry shows my friend!!!

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2 posted 2001-07-02 01:31 PM


love the way this says so much with so little... very enjoyable...


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3 posted 2001-07-02 05:14 PM


This is a lovely poem of love and it is impressive to see your language and English together.  Very nice!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-07-06 03:06 PM



Waseem-
   this is absolutely beautiful.
   a wonderful write..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



helen smith
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5 posted 2001-07-06 09:19 PM


sweet like the poet
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