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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-06 02:39 PM

Doppelganger

speechless silent thoughts
grasping,
grappling for words
unspoken,
gasping for
air
stolen
away

having left burns unseen
electric still tingling
each day
only a
déjà vu
gone
here
how

did you do that…

childhood stutters
rush in
wide-mouthed amaze
of what was
taken
but
still
left
behind

                         warped,
                         presence having
                         dehydrated
                         giving,
                         wrapped
                         beyond call of
                         living,
                         synchronize time
                         with actions
                         of pasts
                         melding into
                         presents
                         of today
                         in gradine of time

                         only shadows
                         cast me
                         down

                         but dropping me
                         forward, you
                         did, so I
                         shall roll
                         out of
                         it

                         and in tomorrow
                         come
                         again

for now,
wordless, tacit,
know one
feel

wear my
presence
well

for I did the same
to
you

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-06-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-06 03:12 PM

intersting title and read... enjoyed this for its abstract images and portrayal of the disjointed yet connected way emotions effect us..

good work

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-06 03:13 PM

wow!! this is perfect!!

lovin this

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-07-06 10:39 PM

Very very well done, LinW, loved the dualism..gentle smile

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2001-07-07 04:04 PM

I had to read this several times. Very good.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-07-09 11:51 AM

Wear your presence like a robe.
Well done, indeed.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-08-09 02:55 PM

what can I say ..where is ms martie
when I need some suggestions(grin)
this was more than a mouthful
and so well said too.

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-09-2002 02:57 PM).]

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