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Mike
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0 posted 2001-07-05 10:37 PM


Muslin white curtains,
...and cracked window pane,
Crickets are chirping,
...in evening's refrain,
Ebon night table,
...by comforted bed,
Children are sleeping,
...prayers long since said,
Out in the kitchen,
...wood cupboards are bare,
Soft is the humming,
...of white frigidaire,
Bare light bulb hanging,
...sits coffee pot dry,
Teardrop stained table,
...young mother does cry,
No answers forthcoming,
...no need to ask why,
Alone at the table,
...young mother does cry.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 07-05-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-05 10:40 PM


This is moving portrait...you know how you can smell the scent of a house? I was smelling laundry and starch and dinner remnants...perfect from you again, Mike!
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2 posted 2001-07-06 12:14 PM


Mike~
You gathered me in an especially poignant moment~
~*Marge*~

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inot2B
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3 posted 2001-07-06 04:31 PM


Sad, but a very vivid part of life.
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4 posted 2001-07-06 05:43 PM


too, too common

sad portrait, well done

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5 posted 2001-07-06 06:00 PM


sad, but well portrayed... nice writing here.


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