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Triangle Park |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Triangle Park A little patch in the midst of a city twenty years ago I’d sit on that metal circle one foot in the gravel pushing myself backward around slowly watch the traffic go by the heads dozing on benches still as if already dead but mostly I just circled back resting on a metal bar cigarette in hand lazily absorbing the day with youthful abstract dreams of love writing words in my head I sit here tonight twenty years later hugging the memory of that kid |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
JLR I think there are times for all of us that would like to go back to being a kid! I really enjoyed reading that thanks Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember both then, and now.... thanks for this.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it was a park not far from my house. . . thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like this...and it took me a long time to remember that little girl and accept her. Nice write, JLR... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Just precious, JLR. I have been there too. It's a lovely place, yet never quite the same as it used to be, huh? Great write!  All writing comes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...after twenty years your luckly its still there...James |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thanks for the memories! |
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SILLY WAWCHEO Junior Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 13Mighigan |
Wow what a nice poem, I enjoyed this SLS |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bravo! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Enjoyed... nicely told and the ending ties together the whole.. Bravo!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
When you're little, you want to be big. And when you're big you wish you were little. Very cool poem  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
reflection, nostalgia, we go there and find peace, often, I hope it makes us grow as a person, too |
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