Open Poetry #14 |
Is Freedom? |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Is freedom a place to live, to breath, to sleep? Is freedom an ability to speak, to hear, to dance? Is freedom a religion to cry, to pray, to love? Is freedom a right to vote, to protest, to overturn? Is freedom a responsibility to think, to reason, to judge? Is freedom a gift to be used, to be given, to be held? Yes, freedom IS: you have the place you have the ability you have the religion you have the right you have the responsibility you have the gift of freedom. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, freedom is......I liked this very much! Happy 4th!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was fantastic! Freedom is of course all of those things, and the ability to write about, and share them with others. Happy 4th of July to you and yours. If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Well said! We should stop and appreciate our freedom, every day! Cor |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now this one, I must think about...I loved the points your bring up, and as always you inspire me...have missed you yanno (it doesn't take long) But let the muse have her way...she gets ornery if ya don't...more later! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to agree! This is so well laid out in the format you chose....very good writing! Freedom is being able to read, respond and understand these poetic creations! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- YES! this is awesome! you've said it all with this piece.. hugs, ~vicky |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yes! Yes! Yes! wahoooo you go girl! Well said m'dear Maree "little miss understood |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hear, Hear! I wish more people would realize what they've got and lots more who come would also. jwesley |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
good expretion of freedom.............but in big countries freedom is no more than rules and votes ..........there is no freedom at all ....... good questionaric poem |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
YES! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I liked this one very much, PDV... you asked some great questions... and yes, freedom IS! *S* And a heartfelt thanks to those who make it so for the rest of us. *S* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW Oh WOW Oh WOWI think I'll take the freedom to put this in my lib Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
OOOps, forgot to cross the lib, sorry A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, freedom is all that...and yet, I can't help but think about the promise to be free even if the world holds one captive, that is surely the freedome of the heart and the spirit |
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